My Narrative

In class we have been working on writing narratives so here is my narrative. I have had fun and worked hard on it.

                  The Movie

Tearing open the Theatre door wondering what the movie was going to be.

Rushing through my head thoughts were just like fish swimming in a tank, except for the fact they were thinking 4-D or 3-D I decided on 4-D.

Wripping the ticket out of His hand, striding with pride into the Movie theatre. To stop to an unpleasent surprise, front Row is the worst and I’m in it. Ads, Ads and even more Ads kept playing.

Buckets, within them held 3-D glasses came and went. Momentarily I realised the seats were different then I remembered this was 4-D.

Action packed is what it was, Suddenly it was like I was on a rollercoaster infact I’m pretty Sure it was a rollercoaster. Bang!! Bang!!! BANG!!!!!

I was sent flying through the air I was a Human Cannon ball, Other dimensions were rushing past me like a whirpool. Eventually I stopped with an unnexpected, soft as a feather landing. Bounding up, checking out her surroundings.Lollies from top to bottom, it looked like nature in candy land. Heaven she thought well not for me. She touched rasberry licorice and It was at this moment She realised THIS WAS NOT A DREAM!!!!

Pounding 1 million times a second her heart was clearly racing. Sharks were chomping in her brain, sweaty hands, Anxious thoughts were wandering into there own unwelcome spaces. Dimensions are crazy, How will I get out. Caustiosness had become who she was tiny steps at a time. Peering everywhere she Eyes out a computer with a chair infront and a bag of delicious looking pocorn. Intreaged she shuffles closer…

Eventually she reaches the Magnificent chair and plays the movie, It was the movie she was just watching. 4-D, Earlier the movie was 4-D so the movie playing must 4-D right. Plonked on the seat watching the movie she

heard the three bangs she heard earlier. Suddenly she went flying, Watching dimensions zooming past her with a sudden drop everyone was staring at her in the theatre In the front row.

Tears coming down her cheeks running through the hallway. Realising that this was not a dream and she had to contact a scientist, Made a decision in her mind she wasn’t going to come near this theatre ever again, And with that she shredded open and closed the doors. She was never seen at this Movie theatre again.