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Thursday, July 25, 2019

Home Learning

Kia Ora Bloggers, today's post is a home earning blog. It will be based on a picture and I have to create my blog around it. Here is the picture:


I am going to do a three or four line poem for this.


As we look at your beauty, we see the cracks of you underworld and your true colours shine through.

The pictures on the wall are no longer true, we act like everything is normal.

Our world is changing, the most beautiful days are now the worst for life.


Hope you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for reading. Bye.

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Julia, I really like post on your poem. I think it is really good poem it is well writen. It made me think of all the changes that are happening in our world.
    well done.
    From Honor

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    1. Thank you for replying.

      Yes, it was meant to kind of show what bad things are happening in the world. Have you ever thought of writing a poem like this?

      Kind Regards
      Julia

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  2. Hi my name is Navarah I like the way you made the tree look like a face and I also like that you made half of it nature and the other half foggy

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