My Birthday
I have been learning on how to write a recount. Kauri (my class) have been working on our paragraphs and punctuation. Each of us had a buddy conference with somebody else. My awesome and fantastic recount is about My birthday Party at Mega Air.
My Birthday Was awesome. About a month ago on Saturday me and some of my friends ( Lauren, Catie, Tessa, Abigail, Timothy, Parwin, Jedi, Billie, Jacob and Johnny) came to Mega Air with Me to help me enjoy my ninth Birthday, all of us went to Mega Air because it was my Birthday Party. Mega Air is a Trampoline place.
Mum and I picked Catie up because her family was having a garage sale, so when we got to Mega Air we went to the front desk and the woman there showed us our party room. I felt really Excited but we were waiting for ten minutes and I am not patient so it was boring.
After people had arrived we watched a safety video and all of the rules for when you are jumping. Since mum had booked a party room all of my friends didn’t have to put our shoes in cubbies where you would normally put them.
When the Video finished we finally got to bounce. My friend Lauren (from trampolining) and I were doing barani’s and full twist barani’s and it was fun. Some of my friends came with me to the foam pit where we did tons of things. On the tumbling track I was doing front handsprings and front tucks. Then there was a game of dodgeball and all of my friends came in, the two boys were on one side ( my brother and his friend ) and my friends and I were on the other side. There was other people we didn’t know too. Then we went to a place in Mega Air which I think is called The Alps, where you jump higher and higher and higher. Then we bounced for a bit more and we had to go to the party room after a bit.
Before we went to the party room we made sure we had everyone when we got in we had yummy and scrumptious food. Then we opened my awesome presents and had cake, some people had to leave early which I didn’t like but that’s life. We got kicked out of the room too soon then everyone got collected. Catie and I got to go to billie’s house after.
Finally in the end, the day was deliciously awesome. I loved my presents and I loved jumping and doing tricks. After all my number one favourite thing was getting to hang out with my friends.
What a fantastic party. Reading your well organised recount, Julia, I almost felt as though I was there. I am impressed by the way that you are choosing juicy words in your writing.
ReplyDeleteHow amazing to have a party room. In my day I had a cake and we went to the movies. The Alps sounds amazing. Just how high did you jump? I too think it is wonderful to hang out with friends.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your next blog post.