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Thursday, August 6, 2015

Rocket Story

One morning when I woke I noticed every single thing outside was different . It was almost like this type of smoke or gas or something similar.


So as I would usually do on a daily basis I went to watch TV but that very second I saw a Rocket getting ready to launch.It was in our garden. So I swung my dressing gown on ,I ran faster than light years to the Rocket By two seconds I managed to get in. I got in by a ladder.

I went to Mars I got a Mars Bar, when I was coming back to Earth I went through the Milky way and I got a Milky way bar and that was the end of space. HOPE YOU LIKE IT !!!!
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 11, 2015 at 11:02 AM

    Kia ora Julia i like how you highlighted the word rocket and great story

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  2. Mrs SpraggAugust 12, 2015 at 8:30 PM

    Julia I love your presentation. It is so eye catching and really makes me want to read it. It is a good story. I liked your use of humour at the end and now I'm off to find a Milky Bar.

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  3. AnonymousAugust 14, 2015 at 2:59 PM

    i like your rocket story

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