On the Thursday of last week our whole class went to the A&P Show. So this is what we were basing our work on. I hope you enjoy and learn something & please give me feedback.
How wonderful to create your own ride. I note you have considered safety features. Of course the challenge with a ride of this sort is that you want it to be thrilling and this means it can be a real challenge to keep it safe.
I am not a big thrill seeker but I enjoy the rides in theme parks. Do you have a favourite ride? Maybe it is the one you have created.
Hi julia I really like your pictures of your story Next time you could show tell us what were you learning about This reminded me off free writing Mehakpreet :)
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How wonderful to create your own ride. I note you have considered safety features. Of course the challenge with a ride of this sort is that you want it to be thrilling and this means it can be a real challenge to keep it safe.
ReplyDeleteI am not a big thrill seeker but I enjoy the rides in theme parks. Do you have a favourite ride? Maybe it is the one you have created.
I look forward to your next blog post.
Hi julia
ReplyDeleteI really like your pictures of your story
Next time you could show tell us what were you learning about
This reminded me off free writing
Mehakpreet :)