My Mihi

The past term our class has been working on our Mihi's.
This is my mihi. If something is wrong with my maori language please point it out.

Here it is :

Tena koutou, tena koutou, tena koutou katoa.

Ko  Te iringa ka o kahikura  te maunga.

Ko Otakaro te awa.

Kei Melton te hauauru toku kainga noho.

No Otatahi ahau.

Ko Yaldhurst toku kura

Ko Mrs Spragg and Mrs Taylor taku kaiako.

Ko Barrie raua ko  Roy oku koro.

Ko  Norma raua ko Annette oku kuia.

Ko Deb toku whaea.

Ko Dan toku matua.

Ko Jacob tōku tuakana Tungane

Ko Johnny toku teina tungane

E iwa oku tau.

Ko Julia  toku ingoa.

No reira, tena koutou, tena koutou, tena koutou katoa.