Monday, August 1, 2016
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This really is a good read, Julia. You have added detail to interest the reader. your use of speech is effective and your words add to every picture. I am looking forward to reading your next creation.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing this story Julia. I like the way you have used speech marks to make it easier to follow the various conversations. Why do you think your main character set off on the journey? How do you imagine the monster changes his face?
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your next blog post.
That is a amazing story.
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ReplyDeleteIt is a bit too long maybe shorten it up.
ReplyDeleteHi Julia,
ReplyDeleteJulia here I am in Kauri from Yaldhurst Model School. I really like how you made it about art and love. In my thoughts it was a bit too long so maybe you could shorten it up, hey it is just an idea. But all around it was awesome. Why was his name Hugo? Can’t wait for your next post bye!
Hi Julia,
ReplyDeleteJulia here I am in Kauri from Yaldhurst Model School. I really like how you made it about art and love. In my thoughts it was a bit too long so maybe you could shorten it up, hey it is just an idea. But all around it was awesome. Why was his name Hugo? Can’t wait for your next post bye!