Julia I love the pictures you have shared. You have managed to put a lot of the photos we collected over the days. It made me smile to see them all. Did you have a favourite page?
Hello Julia, my name is Lauren and I am a student in Room 8 St. Bernadette's primary School. I really like your photos that you put in they were really cool. Maybe next time you could include more text and less pictures. I also really like the way you put a lot of colour in it really hooked me in. I am looking forward to seeing more of your work.
Hi my name Isabel, I'm in room 8 at St Bernadette's,I watched your slide show, it looked really fun I also went to camp at my school to Woodend. For next time maybe add in words to explain what happened so the readers know what you did at camp. How long did you stay at camp for?
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Julia I love the pictures you have shared. You have managed to put a lot of the photos we collected over the days. It made me smile to see them all. Did you have a favourite page?
ReplyDeleteHello Julia, my name is Lauren and I am a student in Room 8 St. Bernadette's primary School. I really like your photos that you put in they were really cool. Maybe next time you could include more text and less pictures. I also really like the way you put a lot of colour in it really hooked me in. I am looking forward to seeing more of your work.
ReplyDeleteHi my name Isabel, I'm in room 8 at St Bernadette's,I watched your slide show, it looked really fun I also went to camp at my school to Woodend. For next time maybe add in words to explain what happened so the readers know what you did at camp.
ReplyDeleteHow long did you stay at camp for?
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