Monday, May 18, 2015
5sc week 5
Favourite colours. I like red because the colour fits my nail polish. I like red because red bows look pretty in my hair.I like red because dress's that are red go good with my shoes.I like red because it reminds me of a rainbow.I like red because poppies are red.
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Hello Julia,
ReplyDeleteRed is a primary colour along with blue and yellow. I think it is a good choice for a favourite because it is in many other colours.
As I read your interesting sentences, I thought of a girl with red nail polish, a red bow, a red dress and read shoes standing under a rainbow while in a fields of red poppies. When we write sentences that can help readers imagine what we are sharing, it shows we are developing good writing skills. Well done.
Ross Mannell (Team 5SC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia