Today I decided to write a Poem
Here It is:
Spring is here
Spring is bright
Spring is here like candle light
Spring is warm
Spring is Warm
Windy air (not too windy)
But not too cool
Leaves are here
Leaves are bright
Goodbye snow
Hello Flowers
Ice creams are good
but Cool drinks best
This Is why I like Spring
Spring Is good But Summer is best
Goodbye clouds
Hello sun
Jerseys Off
T - Shirts on
Pool time is almost here
Don't get too excited
Spring is here
You know it's here
Leaves are pretty & so are flowers
The air is nice and warm.
Sunshine is coming,
prepare for the best.
Winter is gone,
Say hello to Spring
- Julia
I hope you liked it. I'm sorry if I have made any mistakes please tell me if I have.
Please comment in the comment section below.
Hi Julia, it's Mrs Hey from Gilberthorpe School. I loved the rhymes that you worked into your poem. I love Spring too! Do you think that you will write a poem about summer when it arrives? :)
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Mrs Hey,
DeleteI think that it is cool how you like Spring too, Spring is my favourite because it's not too cold but not too hot.
Yes, I do think that I will write a poem about Summer as well.
Why do you like Spring so much?
Hi Julia my name is Antonette and I'm a year 6 student from St.Bernadette's School. I really like the way you described your spring poem and it sounded that you love spring! Have you thought of using an interesting title? I'm excited on seeing more work from you Julia!
ReplyDeleteThankyou for the comment Antonette,
DeleteI do love Spring, it's my favourite season so you were correct on that one. I think that I will change the title so that it is more interesting and attracts more people to comment.
What is your favourite season and why?