Hi Julia! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School, you know me, right?. I like the way that you have done your blog beautifully and quick at the same time. It reminds me of last year when I was doing my summer learning journey. Some blogs would end up like that!
Maybe you could add them into one paragraphs instead of putting numbers and the answer next to it. Was it easy to do?, because I found it very hard!
Kia Ora Mia, I think it was quite easy to do, I was getting very rushed though. The reason I put them into numbers is because for me it feels neater and if I had more time I probably would have done that. What country did you do? Thank you for commenting.
Hi is your jumpy friend Jedi here, you have done such a neat job on your prep post! I love it because it's simple, but well put together. I really like the fact that you have, made the slides all the same. And that you didn't put really distracting backgrounds, that make the text hard to read.
Can you explain why you chose, The United Arab Emirates. Great job Julia, I will totally make sure to check out your blog during the holidays.
Kia Ora Jedi! sorry for the late reply. (replies months later).
Thank you for taking the time to read my blog post. I decided to do 'The United Arab Emirates' because it was different and something I didn't know anything about it. Again thank you for commenting!
Hey Julia! I really liked your post! I liked how you made it into a slide instead of a normal blog post. Do you think that you will ever visit there when your older? What makes you think that? One thing that I found hard was reading the text. I know that it looks messy but I would have appreciated it if the text on the slide was a little smaller. Great post! From Hannah.
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Hi Julia! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School, you know me, right?. I like the way that you have done your blog beautifully and quick at the same time. It reminds me of last year when I was doing my summer learning journey. Some blogs would end up like that!
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could add them into one paragraphs instead of putting numbers and the answer next to it. Was it easy to do?, because I found it very hard!
Great work!
Mia
Kia Ora Mia, I think it was quite easy to do, I was getting very rushed though. The reason I put them into numbers is because for me it feels neater and if I had more time I probably would have done that. What country did you do?
DeleteThank you for commenting.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
Wow Julia!
ReplyDeleteHi is your jumpy friend Jedi here, you have done such a neat job on your prep post! I love it because it's simple, but well put together. I really like the fact that you have, made the slides all the same. And that you didn't put really distracting backgrounds, that make the text hard to read.
Can you explain why you chose, The United Arab Emirates.
Great job Julia, I will totally make sure to check out your blog during the holidays.
Jedi :D
Kia Ora Jedi! sorry for the late reply. (replies months later).
DeleteThank you for taking the time to read my blog post. I decided to do 'The United Arab Emirates' because it was different and something I didn't know anything about it. Again thank you for commenting!
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
Hey Julia!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your post! I liked how you made it into a slide instead of a normal blog post. Do you think that you will ever visit there when your older? What makes you think that? One thing that I found hard was reading the text. I know that it looks messy but I would have appreciated it if the text on the slide was a little smaller.
Great post!
From Hannah.