Athletics Day Recount!

Kia Ora. This week's blog is a recount about Athletics day at my school. In class, we have been focusing on the writing genre 'Recount' so far. I have been learning about how to add detail into recounts to make them exciting as well as making sure that even though I use descriptive language my recount does not become a narrative in structure.  I found learning how to do that difficult because I have always written recounts without description and that is what the teacher's would like us to improve. I think that I have improved on my description in each paragraph. I hope you enjoy!