Kia Ora Bloggers!
Today I will be posting about my long write. I will only do the first paragraph so it won't bore you.
We had been improving on these and so we did a long write. We had a story starter as we all had to base it off of one thing. Although I have already made improvements, for the future could you please give some feedback and feedforward. Thank you!
I hope you enjoyed the first paragraph. I wanted to show this as I feel it had to most figurative language. I hope you enjoyed!
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