My Camp Letter

24 / 3 / 2016

Kauri / Rimu

Yaldhurst Model School

Christchurch

Dear Andie,

Hi it’s Julia, (who was in your tribe) I would like to thank you for coming to camp, it was a pleasure to have you in our Tribe. Without you it would not have been as AMAZINGLY AWESOME!!

The things I enjoyed most would have to be, The Hike because it was so beautiful and the waterfall was very refreshing, Tree Climbing because it challenged me and I was scared but I did it and it was Spectacular and It wasn’t scary, I was proud of myself (for climbing the tree) and last of all I loved Orienteering because we had to work as a group and it was great.walking in bushes and working hard as a group. I can remember when you stayed back a bit to help Billie and I, that helped me alot and I can remember when you were in my group for orienteering and I wanted to thank you for that and it was very helpful, I was excited when you said yes to being in my group for orienteering.

Oh and I would just like to ask you a few questions about your camp experiences.

What was your favourite activity on camp? What did you like the most about the waterfall hike?Did you like the paint game? What was the most challenging part of camp for you? What was your most favourite food? What was the drive from school to hanmer like? I know that for me the drive was exciting because we were trying to beat the boys.

And yet again thankyou thankyou thankyou so so much!! I don’t know how else I could thankyou, but I know you made me have the greatest first camp ever!! And I hope you come to wainui camp!!

Yours sincerely

Julia

We have been learning to 

Use paragraphs for each new idea
Use interesting words
Edit our writing with a buddy to make it even better
Reflect on our writing using the rubric

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