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Monday, August 8, 2016

My Mastered Metaphor

Jedi  


Jedi is a Trampoline
Bubbling up with ideas


She is a Tornado
Striking into the class


Jedi is a Snazzy person
Living life being hysterical


She is a Puppy dog
Being very kindhearted


Jedi is a Whirlpool
Submerging into ideas

She is a Fire
Burning off energy


She is an Elephant
Scattering everything everywhere

Jedi is Awesome, You should meet her.

4 comments:

  1. What an amazingly complementary set of similes. And you are right; Jedi is awesome! You are also an awesome writer. I do not think that Jedi is the only person I know who is bubbling up with ideas.

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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  3. Hi there, my name is Olivia and I am a student in room 5 at Awahono School. I really like the highlighted words. It made me think of a jet. Have you thought about the part that says she is a fire that is highlighted in really light blue.

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