Jedi
Jedi is a Trampoline
Bubbling up with ideas
She is a Tornado
Striking into the class
Living life being hysterical
She is a Puppy dog
Being very kindhearted
Jedi is a Whirlpool
Submerging into ideas
She is a Fire
Burning off energy
She is an Elephant
Scattering everything everywhere
Jedi is Awesome, You should meet her.
What an amazingly complementary set of similes. And you are right; Jedi is awesome! You are also an awesome writer. I do not think that Jedi is the only person I know who is bubbling up with ideas.
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I love your poem.
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ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Olivia and I am a student in room 5 at Awahono School. I really like the highlighted words. It made me think of a jet. Have you thought about the part that says she is a fire that is highlighted in really light blue.
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