Thanks for sharing your learning. This is a very brief post though. Usually you write more and give us a better understanding of what the task was and why you did what you did. However I do like your drawing and the fact you shared was interesting.
I'm Kaia from Kawakawa Primary School. I really like your drawing and your little bit of writing on the side. Maybe next time you can go closer to the camera so it would be easier to see the drawing and writing.
I really like Toucans. There were once famous for advertising Guinness - a famous Irish brand of beer. I always thought because of their beaks, they would be better suited to advertising Bananas - as their beaks look like Bananas!
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Hi Julia,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your learning. This is a very brief post though. Usually you write more and give us a better understanding of what the task was and why you did what you did. However I do like your drawing and the fact you shared was interesting.
:) Mrs Spragg
Hello Julia.
ReplyDeleteI'm Kaia from Kawakawa Primary School. I really like your drawing and your little bit of writing on the side. Maybe next time you can go closer to the camera so it would be easier to see the drawing and writing.
Dear Julia
ReplyDeleteYour drawing is very cool
have you tried adding more toucans.
-Shanaya
Hi Julia,
ReplyDeleteI really like Toucans. There were once famous for advertising Guinness - a famous Irish brand of beer. I always thought because of their beaks, they would be better suited to advertising Bananas - as their beaks look like Bananas!