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Monday, August 8, 2016

Simile poem:)

In class last week we were learning about similes so here's a simile poem by me



I am as ….
Quick as a bolt of lightning
Slow as the slowest turtle
Happy as a puppy dog
Nice as a delicate voice
Cold as a frozen lake
Hot as a hot dog
Strong as My dad
Loud as a Kaka beak plant
Quiet as 10 million people
Tough as a grown man
Gentle as a soft rug
Brave as a Soldier
Wild as a pack of wolves
Lazy as a slug
Busy as a buzzing bee
Put it all together and you’ve got crazy Julia!


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  1. AnonymousSeptember 2, 2016 at 12:55 PM

    Hi there, my name is Olivia and I am a student in room 5 at Awahono School. I really like the dark blue writing. It made me think of my sister. Have you thought about either colouring the background a dark colour or changing the colour of your writing.

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