HI Julia,my name is Abigail from Waikowhai Primary school. I really like how you answered questions in each slide because it is an easy way to understand in short sentences. Maybe just add a a bit more information and add what inspired you with the speech and who helped you with the speech. I wonder how you write an excellent speech ? Anyway I think everything else is great. Keep on blogging and if you want to check my blog you can go to https://wpsabigaila.blogspot.com/.
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HI Julia,my name is Abigail from Waikowhai Primary school. I really like how you answered questions in each slide because it is an easy way to understand in short sentences. Maybe just add a a bit more information and add what inspired you with the speech and who helped you with the speech. I wonder how you write an excellent speech ? Anyway I think everything else is great. Keep on blogging and if you want to check my blog you can go to https://wpsabigaila.blogspot.com/.
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