The chase begins
A bakery in Turkey that mistook rat poison for for yeast made bread yesterday that killed one of it’s customers and put 25 in hospital. The poison has been left next to sacks of flour. Later on in the week, the rat poison got mistaken again and put another 15 people in hospital.We have been investigating into the case more and more.
And it turns out it is someone who hates working there doing it on purpose.Later on in the week, the rat poison exploded into gas and 10 of the workers dropped dead
Then the rest of the people got evacuated. Later that day we came in to investigate.The next day there were tons of police wondering what had happened.
Then someone came and told the police
what had happened and they were on the case
Then they found out who the criminal was.
Then they were on the hunt to find this stinky man
Well Julia I look forward to finding out what sort of detective you are. Or more to the point I look forward to you spinning an intriguing yarn. Who was this man and what drove him to his extreme actions? How does he feel? You are the writer to fill in the gaps. I look forward to your next blog post.
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